Here is the feedback for my group:
Positive:
I like how several pieces of footage are overlapped. Also how the guitarist goes from tree to tree, and when the singer disappears at the beginning part of the song.
I love the camera being in the same place, and the fads simple locations and ideas shots work really well.
Cute; good opening; costume; guitarist; mise-en-scene; shots; effects; graffiti room.
Rob shots are good. MAX SHOTS ARE AMAZING.
costume change; lip sync; the shot leading up to rob; good editing.
Costume; "party Scene"; Performance.
The first 30 seconds to min has loads of cuts and this makes it more interesting.
So many costume changes; edit of rob beginning + piano fade; looks like music video already.
Happy good lucky feel.
Nice variety of shots; good use of rob; good effects on edit; Jman's shot.
Great shots.
Good use of costume and location; Jahmal shot FTW; teleporting!
Changing spots & costume in same location, very nice! Effect with two videos looks cool; like the behind stage location.
I love the faded shot where Yas looks like she's flying.
Improvements:
Some of the footage was not lip-synced right; Maybe go back and improve this.
Unless there's like a thing you haven't put in yet that'll make it amazing, I wouldn't change much at all.
Lip sync seems out in bits; feet go on too long cut a bit obvious towards end.
Lip sync and guitar sync a bit off.
Add Yaz singing outside; TAKE MAX OUT OF IT (hannah joking)
I think the shot where you sort of see through the piano is held a little too long.
The sync is slightly off at the beginning.
Transparent stuff is best when its just in the piano not the whole frame; Jahmal at back.
Some shots are to overglodid (?)
Lip sync out in faded shot.
HD?
Some lipsyncing shots slightly off.
Lipsync sometimes not right.
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