Monday, 8 March 2010

Monday Lesson

Today we gave every group in the class, peer feedback on their videos.
Here is the feedback for my group: 

Positive: 
I like how several pieces of footage are overlapped. Also how the guitarist goes from tree to tree, and when the singer disappears at the beginning part of the song.
I love the camera being in the same place, and the fads simple locations and ideas shots work really well.
Cute; good opening; costume; guitarist; mise-en-scene; shots; effects; graffiti room. 
Rob shots are good. MAX SHOTS ARE AMAZING.
costume change; lip sync; the shot leading up to rob; good editing.
Costume; "party Scene"; Performance.
The first 30 seconds to min has loads of cuts and this makes it more interesting.
So many costume changes; edit of rob beginning + piano fade; looks like music video already.
Happy good lucky feel. 
Nice variety of shots; good use of rob; good effects on edit; Jman's shot. 
Great shots. 
Good use of costume and location; Jahmal shot FTW; teleporting! 
Changing spots & costume in same location, very nice! Effect with two videos looks cool; like the behind stage location.
I love the faded shot where Yas looks like she's flying. 

Improvements: 
Some of the footage was not lip-synced right; Maybe go back and improve this. 
Unless there's like a thing you haven't put in yet that'll make it amazing, I wouldn't change much at all. 
Lip sync seems out in bits; feet go on too long cut a bit obvious towards end. 
Lip sync and guitar sync a bit off. 
Add Yaz singing outside; TAKE MAX OUT OF IT (hannah joking) 
I think the shot where you sort of see through the piano is held a little too long. 
The sync is slightly off at the beginning. 
Transparent stuff is best when its just in the piano not the whole frame; Jahmal at back. 
Some shots are to overglodid (?)
Lip sync out in faded shot.
HD?
Some lipsyncing shots slightly off.
Lipsync sometimes not right.


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